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Errors in first edition (Rupa,
2003)
There is one major mistake,
which I’ll point out first, and a few minor glitches as well.
Page 271
The 2nd last
paragraph here is wrongly placed. (It reappears correctly on page
273.) It replaces the correct, far shorter paragraph that reads:
The horror of this demise
is not easily entertained. Even indomitable Jade suffered pain and
terror at the end, the moment of realising that her life was being
crushed out of her, this was it, like this, unprepared, complete,
unredeemed, it can end like this.
Page 9
3rd par ADD
quotation marks:
“India”,
says Lauren, “you always wanted to go.” Scathing or approving or put
out. “Don’t get sick
p.12
last
par has single quote marks whereas usually double quotes are used.
p.15
par 4
“Very
[not “Verry]
page 173
last par
boxes
[NOT oxes]
page 56
last line
throwing
her arm [etc]
[this
remains as remnant from the earlier draft where clay cups were used
]
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